Right now, our son has a 'vacation mohawk', a long-wished-for and one-week haircut. NaPoWriMo #16 is for all of those mohawk (and mohawk-hopeful) guys out there. I hope you can read it.
Vacation Haircut
Photo by Amy LV
Today I am honored to share Poetry from the Soul, produced by fifth grade teacher Kyle Leonard and his students Olivia Brumfield (poet) and Marcus Middleton (ukulele player) at Caledonia-Mumford Elementary in Caledonia, NY. Kyle is an inspirational teacher who also runs a ukulele club after school, a club which includes most of the fifth grade class. You can read all sorts of interesting things about the ukulele (I even learned how to spell the word) and hear Kyle's original music here at Ukulelear.
Writing is power, and when we teach children and ourselves to use language with grace and strength, miracles reveal themselves. How lucky we are as teachers, acting as midwives to words upon words.
Poetry from the Soul © Olivia Brumfield
Music by Marcus Middleton
Olivia, Marcus, and Kyle were also generous enough to answer a few questions about their process in creating this work.
How did this project come about?
Kyle: Each year I try to get student submissions for our
BOCES Media Festival, and I knew that Marcus and Olivia had talents that could create something wonderful. I didn't give them much time to put this video together. My only input was to suggest they make a video with Marcus playing ukulele while Olivia read some of her poetry; the result was a pretty incredible collaboration.
Would you please tell a bit about how you wrote these poems?
Olivia: The poems I write come from what I experience. It is a very creative process. My inspiration is life. I pay attention to the little things, like once I wrote about the color green. It's easy to write about the big obvious stuff, but it's a real challenge to write about the little hard-to-see stuff. Things you have to think about:
1. If you're going to rhyme. I usually do.
2. Once you have your idea, what are you going to write?
3. Finally, why are you going to write about it?
That's the challenge.
How did you revise and put your poems together for this video?
Olivia: Making this magical video was a simple but rushed process. First I had to get the poems from my writer's notebook. Then we recorded me saying them with the ukulele in the background. Then Marcus recorded the video. After all that, Mr. Leonard's computer magic took over, and it became a success.
What are you writing right now?
Olivia: At the moment I am writing plain poems. Recently I wrote a chapter book called
Green River. I think you'd enjoy it.
What was it like to play music with someone's words? Did you play as Olivia read, or was this put together afterward?
Marcus: To play with Olivia's words was really easy because I've been practicing this song for months. As strange as it is, the song fit perfectly with the words. The song ended at a good spot. The song is Israel Kamakawiwo'ole's version of
Somewhere Over the Rainbow. Originally Olivia was going to sing this song, but I think it all worked out perfectly.
What did you have to consider as you shot this video? Do you have advice for others who might take on a similar project?
Marcus: You'd think it would be pretty simple to sit on a cart, get pushed by your teacher, and hold a video camera. Well, as you saw in the video, most of the time the video camera was mostly level. That was because I kept my arm straight the whole time. The part that really hurt my arm was when Olivia was writing in her notebook. My friends and I like to skateboard, and I used to shoot videos of cool tricks, and I got really good at it. So, one hint is not to make the camera bounce up and down when you walk with the camera.
Do you have plans for other such projects? Advice for teachers who might wish to try this?
Kyle: I think a lot of teachers are driven by the desire to create and learn, and there is always something new to learn when it comes to technology. The free recording software,
Audacity, is fun to play with and for podcasting. I started with podcasting, and then found that
Windows Media Maker allows one to upload audio into video - the birth of music videos in my classroom.
This video's combination of poetry and music is a powerful way of paying tribute to the talents that we find in all of our students. It takes a couple hours to make a three minute video, so that tends to keep the production level low. But you'll most likely get a gem in the process.
What one word best describes your goal as a teacher? (Poetry is about economy of words, after all!)
Kyle: Well, there is a well-known Yeats quote that says, "...Education is the lighting of a fire...", so I think my word would be 'enkindler'. This word denotes the idea of lighting a spark that could lead others on to do greater things. If I could do this for kids, I would feel very successful.
Thank you, Olivia. Thank you, Marcus. And thank you, Kyle. What a true delight.
Teachers - please feel free to share any of your students' recent poetry projects with me here at The Poem Farm. With permissions, I would be tickled to highlight them here on a future Poetry Friday.
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